Friday, May 18, 2012

3rd Teaser

Naje Haje continued:
Alter being upside down for an unknown amount of time, clinging to the most beautiful woman I have ever seen, I suddenly realize I’m on the ground with my head in her lap. In a daze, I look up at  stunning, crystal blue eyes.

“Where are we?” I said, feeling perfect peace.

I should have been unnerved by this strange experience, but I wasn’t. Perhaps it was her touch that calmed me, as she moved my hair off my brow with her soft delicate fingers.

“You’re in the Land of Justice,” she replied, while smiling down at me. “It is one of many holding arenas for the Lake of fire.”

When I sat up, I saw that we were surrounded by mounds of bluebells, daffodils, purple iris and lush green grass that smelled freshly cut. A running brook lowed softly alongside us.

“Where does the stream lead,” I asked, as her radiant blue eyes bore deep into my soul. Waiting for her reply, I walked over to the water, where I bent down, cupped the refreshing liquid in my hands and drank deeply.

“It goes two ways. One direction leads to the River of Life the other to the Lake of fire,” she answered, and then she questioned me. “Why have you never married, Mr. Barlett, you are almost twenty nine years old?”

“I just never met the right girl. Why do you ask?”

“I think most women would find you very attractive,” she said. “Nonetheless, blond hair and blue eyes aren’t always enough to capture a wise woman’s heart.”

“Truly,” I answered, feeling strange effects from the water.

“Your eyes are sparkling, “Windoline said. “I can see my image in them. The water is beginning to churn inside you.”

Amazed, I replied, “I can see me in your eyes.”

I had many more questions, but before I could ask, the most awesome thing came into view—to the left of her stood a huge weeping willow tree. “Why is that tree dripping water from its leaves? It’s not raining.”

          “The tree weeps for mankind.” She smiled sadly, and sighed as her eyes bore deep into mine. “Humans do what is right in their own eyes using themselves as the standard. They create their own rules, all the while ignoring the whispers of their soul. God weeps for us, because he knows that the consequence of poor choices will destroy our body—and if we don’t repent then our soul is lost as well—those consequences we blame on Him rather than loving Him freely and choosing to do what is right.”

I listened intently as I watched her come to her feet with grace and an enchanting demeanor. I wanted to enfold her in my arms and kiss her lovely mouth, but instead I asked, “Why have you brought me here and who are you, really?”

“I am the angel of Good and Evil──the same as white and black.”

“What does that mean?” I said, wondering if I was dead.

“No, you’re not dead.” She smiled the most beautiful smile I had ever seen. “I’m not at liberty to say just now why you are here, only that the Wind has chosen you.”

Thursday, May 10, 2012

2nd teaser

Naje Haje continued:
“What are you doing? Put me down.” His voice was tense and angry—outraged. “Where do you think you’re taking me?”

“You’ll know soon enough,” I answered, knowing that Panic began to take him.” 

“Where are we? Who are you?” 

“My name is Windoline. I am the angel of Black and White.”

“What’s that supposed to mean, and what do you have to do with me?” he asked. “Am I dead?”

“No.” I squeezed his hand to calm him and he relaxed.

“Am I dreaming, or is this really happening? Is this heaven?” Trevor asked—confused.

I knew he did not believe in heaven or hell.

   Suddenly a prodigious roar came from below and with it came darkness. I saw terror in Trevor’s eyes and immediately I pulled him into my arms, but he struggled.
   “You must allow me to hold you,” I whispered in his ear. Panic returned and the hurricane force wind nearly blew us of course. “We are in or a gale, the likes of which you have never experienced, Mr. Barlett.”  
   I tried to calm him in a soothing tone, just as a whirlwind funnel came at us. Without warning it flung us upside down and then sideways—my gown completely covered us from the waist up. Then we began to spin, and Trevor thought he would surely die, but it was not his time yet—he fell unconscious.

Monday, May 7, 2012

Christian Fantasy

1st teaser from story - to be completed on website www.priscillamcdaniel.weebly.com

The Naja Haje Abyss©
By Priscilla McDaniel
Wind and rain poured furiously from the cloud as if it wanted to keep me from going—nevertheless, I had a mission to fulfill and all the tears in the sky could not hold me back. I floated into the alley of Trevor Bartlett’s Bistro. In the blink of an eye, I changed from my long, black and white, chiffon gown into a short, black and white, linen dress, one that would blend with the year 2020. I blinked again for a white broad-brim hat and black high heel shoes.
I knew what Mr. Bartlett’s reaction would be when he saw me sitting at a table in the sun. Though it was not my intent to do so, I stood out in a crowd. Trevor Bartlett was the reason I had come to Greentree, California on planet earth.
“May I bring you a cup of latte?” Mr. Bartlett asked studying me with a quizzical look. “You’re not rom around here, are you?” 
I knew his thoughts and looked up at him with bold blue eyes, and moved a dark curl from my forehead. “Would you mind bringing me a glass of water with that latte, as soon as possible please?”
“Yes certainly,” he replied, staring at me, standing still.
“Well, Mr. Bartlett, am I asking too much?”
“No, no, not at all,” he stammered, embarrassed by his focused gaze.
When he returned with my coffee and water he asked, “How do you know my name?” 
Suddenly he noticed the palm trees that swayed gently overhead as the breeze addressed me. I took a deep breath, and spoke softly, almost inaudibly, “Anon, anon.” Then I paused and looked up at him, “Thank you for the water and latte.” 
“What exactly does anon mean? That’s what you said, I’m sure I heard you.”
“Perhaps it was the wind you heard.” I feigned ignorance and then dismissed him.
“How did you know my name?” he said a second time.
I did not answer for trying to hear the voice in the breeze. “Take him now, Windoline! Take him now! You have no more time.”
Without another word I grabbed the tall, slender Trevor by the hand. We sailed into the air side by side, as I magically changed back into my traveling gown.
“What are you doing? Put me down.” His voice was tense and angry—outraged. “Where do you think you’re taking me?”

Friday, April 6, 2012

Mount Hermon Results, thank you Jesus

Above is my roommate, Sue Tornai, we were a perfect match to room and ride together, thank you Sue.
   Hearing, Listening to, and Loving God
  While at Mount Hermon Christian Writers’ Conference, Mar 29 – Apr 2, I had an amazing experience. I actually listened to what God was saying to me. “Priscilla, you are out there promoting your own efforts with your historical romance. Wasn’t our story about Jesus, Joseph and Mary traveling to Egypt good enough for you?”
    Well, as Liz Curtis Higgs said, I felt the ‘hot hand of God on my back’. Just before this, the Lord spoke to me in one of the workshops that said writers need to focus on their writing, not different genres. At the conference no one liked my historical romance, and during my mentoring track for a work-in-progress I submitted a historical romance and the leader tore it apart. I can’t give her credit for that, it was God’s doing—just another way to wake me up.
   What did I do? I listened and did what I should have done from the start. I put aside my historical romance and never mentioned it from Sunday thru Tues (the remainder of the conference that started on Thursday). I told everyone that I wrote biblical fiction. On Monday morning, I had an appointment with the senior editor of WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing, the evangelical division of Random House and she asked me to send her my manuscript. Below is a snippet about the book
    Gifts for the Road is complete in 91,200 words.
    It’s about trusting God, while facing the unknown, as the Holy Family leaves Bethlehem for Egypt under the threat of Herod’s soldiers looking to kill Jesus. The family is also pursued by two thieves seeking to steal the Magi gifts. Joseph, Mary, and Jesus travel with Mary’s maidservant, Joseph’s friend, and borrowed servants. The wayfarers visit family, sleep in caves and are hosted by Jewish families living in Egypt. Among their adventures, they encounter wild animals, ride camels and sail the Mediterranean. Answering questions along the way as to why they are so far from home, Mary and Joseph share prophecy and the birth of Jesus. Some believe them, some do not. Joseph takes his family one hundred and fifty miles south along the Nile, where they spend six months in a cave and one of the thieves becomes saved. Before heading home on a Roman vessel, Joseph and those with him help a destitute family in Alexandria get back on their feet.

Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Ready for Mount Hermon

I have never been nervous about much, anxious sometimes, but now with all that awaits me at Mount Hermon Christian Writers Conference, I know that only with God’s help will I manage to stay calm.

My books are ready. I sent one for a critique and one for a publisher’s review. What they have to say, I don’t know. I only know that I write for the Lord – biblical fiction and historical romance. It is so much fun to create, but once again, without God’s help, I would be useless. He and I meet every morning and we have a conversation about my stories. Granted, it seems like a one sided conversation sometimes, but if I am still and listen then I hear what He has to say through his Holy Spirit. Thank you, Jesus.

Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Interview

See my interview on http://www.inspirewriters.com/.  Inspire is a fine Christian Writers group in the Sacramento area that helps writers with critiques and needed inspiration on how to do it right.  Check out their website and see everything else they do for their members.